These are the two concepts I presented for the week 5 interim assessment. The feedback I got from my class mates was that they both have a clear message. However in the first concept, it is hard to tell that the person is sitting in a tent because I have got the proportions wrong. In the second concept I was given the feedback that the I could re-think my choice of colour, maybe experiment with some brighter colours and even use an image of a more run down house to make the message clearer.
After speaking to Donald, he suggested I try and resolve one of the concepts in a different style, because at the moment they are both the same visual style which doesn't fit with the brief. I agree with all this feedback and feel like I need to simplify the message that I am trying to communicte to make a sucessful poster, at the moment I am trying to add in too many layers of information which doesn't for a clear simple message.
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